Friday, 5 February 2010

An Unequal Relationship

They'd made love like gentle summer winds. Fucked like wild rabbits on the brink of extinction.

She lay back, dreamy, exhausted. He reached over to the dresser and lit a cigarette. Adoringly, she whispered in his ear, "I love you."

Absently, he replied, "Yeah, me too," contemplating the benefits of mushrooms in a cheese omelette.

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Bhakti said...

Beautifully put.

Avantika A. said...

Oh, that omelette will taste goo-ood! :D

jhayu said...

@ Bhakti.
= ) Many thanks. And welcome. And why hiding yourself?

@ The FaujiWife.
= ) I can assure you, I make a better one.

Scattered Thoughts... said...

Bang on the point.. I once heard.. how do you define eternity.. the time between you come and she leaves :) am I being a pervert here?

fishbowl said...

very nicely put indeed:)

aditi said...

mushroom cheese omelette

Preeti said...

Good Lord!

Very unlike what you write. I am involved in an internal debate about this one.

It left me feeling like there is a lump of ice in the place where my heart once used to be. Hard hitting. Chilling to the bone.

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